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Yalatola

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Chaos_lord_
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And changing the pov without any indication is kinda of confusing too Hope the future chapters ain’t like this

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Okay good work

Yalatola:pov were my first ideas to let know to the readers that the personalities were switched, Sigma only using first POV, Beta 3rd, etc. I understood that it was a bad idea and it's part of what I'm correcting. The POV is back to normal from chapter 31, bear with it for a little more, please.
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Tommyshelby
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she is a player who is with the dean

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I’m seriously not enjoying it, all this gamma beta personas are confusing I dunno if it’s explained in previous chapters and I skipped it or it’s just unexplained.

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