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Comments of chapter undefined of The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Complete]

81MrX
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I don't know what you have planned for this fic but if you want and are willing, please đŸ„ș after you have finished this fanfic, why don't you do a continuation of this fic but as a new book? 📚 Where he and his girlfriend's/wife's find or create a dimension portaling through the omniverse. Or just let the gamer system unlock it lol 😆. And since not everyone would like that I guess, just make it a new book as I said 🙂 Got to catch more wife's you know 😘

Isaiah10
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Luna keeps calling him a supervillain so maybe he becomes the new Black King of the Hellfire club in a Marvel crossover.

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Khrys_Languin
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You beautiful bas**rd take my powerstones. Heather and Hermione having a late night study session with the assistant professor... I like where this is going.

jeanpierregerardo
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DeberĂ­a resolver el problema de fleur , le serĂĄ un problema mĂĄs adelante, es mejor contarle cĂłmo dombundlore lo mando a cuidar a potter y el resto y aclarar el malentendido.

SinX_Five
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Thanks for the chapter

JustBearWithMe
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Thanks for the chapter 👍

Shaman_Jeka
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Are you saying that any fool can write the name of some powerful magician on a piece of paper, put it in a cup and not tell him about it, thereby depriving him of magic?! Where is the logic?

Lord_Delta
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reader12143546
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wonderful chapter author sama.

BJ1869
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Thanks for the chapter

Hanni_Baal
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TFTC!!

Aprentice
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thanks for the chp

Yui_Sealfat
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Thank for good chapter.

AvidReader962
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asdasdssf
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Sigh, it's getting really tiring how self righteous mc is. And story constantly makes others stupid (even when they actually are not sometimes) just so mc can look good. Like in this case Crouch just said she'll lose her magic. Which is true. And mc goes on whole monologue about him being only reasonable person and Crouch is idiot for saying the truth? What? Honestly story is just too cringe, mc or narration is constaly going on some monologue about people being more stupid than the mc and his girls. In very cringe way.

Somnifer
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Thanks for the chapter

Kurumi21
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Thanks for the chapter ! 😁 👍

Neo_Infinity
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Thanks for the great chapter you addressed an important plot hole that harry probably was his school official champ so his points weren’t necessary to count against others all that mattered is that he must complete.

LeProphet
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i think i know how he got her name he got it off her homework paper for the cup cause the reason why they use feathers to write is their magic channels through the feather onto the paper making it legit its why magic contracts are dangerous someone writes their name down on anything a person can take that and put it on a slave contract of sorts and you cant defend against it

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