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Comments of chapter undefined of The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Complete]

Ley
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Thanks for the chapter!

King_Arthuer4888
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a wild Luna appears

RadTaz
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its really hard to tell if his skill level ups mean anything, is speech skill seems to be leveling up but from the way he talks it doesn't seem to be helping much

Khrys_Languin
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In walks his first school conquest ... actually, she's not a bad start. She probably already knows she's gonna be in his coven and decided to have him help her with her important problem ... her virginity. hahaha

Toseeb_Qais
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I don’t mind Luna but the fanfics I have rad where she seems to know of other world powers is a bit insane he is given a power that influences everything yet gets caught by a student.

S_S_25
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What is your favourite Harry Potter fanfiction, author? In addition, if you could include N. Tonks in the group.

Miki_Marlo75
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I hope it's not the typical moon cliché, it's too used and boring when it supposedly knows everything

ErozothDraeor
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The all knowing Luna, a bit too many cliches around and its piling up. Chapter was fine, I really doubt (hope), they only learned 4-5 spells over 3 years in Charms class. I think its safer to assume the canon just didn't mention others to spare details.

S_S_25
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I hope you don't make Neville - "Ron but without flaws" character

Lucikiel
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Thanks for the chapter

Sommerscave
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Thanks for the chapter looking Forward to what is all gonna Happen with Luna...

JustBearWithMe
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Thanks for the chapter 👍

Shurasik
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Thanks for the chapter

jeanpierregerardo
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More chapter

Readtilltheybleed
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Mc addresses Ron as Ron in one sentence while he claims he ‘doesn’t address students by their first names’ in the next


Yui_Sealfat
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Thank for good chapter.

AvidReader962
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Great chapter

Arc777
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Somnifer
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Thanks for the chapter

Kurumi21
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Thanks for the chapter ! 😁 👍

DRACONIAN619
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thanks again for another really wonderful and exciting chapter