Comments of chapter undefined of The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Complete]

oh this is a Harem. Personally, I prefer when its system "induced", ie the system has an actual reward or skill to make a harem more... acceptable, as unreal that is, it feels more realistic than actually getting multiple girls accepting it, unless its part of the society but then the MC can't be the only one. Good chapter overall, there is to much hinting at stuff: his parents, the soul in Heather, and all that for the MC to ignore or think he imagined it. It would be better to not do such things, hinting to tease a plot and just outright saying it then having the MC ignore it is not the same thing.

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I have a question: can he not go to the bank and make a blood heritage test?

Honestly it's a little unrealistic that his Magic theory is level 60 yet he isn't linking Padfoot's human behavior with Animagus.

The mc isn’t “a little dense” he’s actually very autistic. It is kinda unsettling to read if I’ honest.

How come hes so dense tough? does he have some kind of psychological issue that mutes his emotions or feelings or something ?

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That the MC is dense does not add humor to the story bro, it only causes frustration in the reader

So… Rons a simp… or would that be a beta simp? (Yes, I did leave biggest anime simp gif)

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

what is your upload schedule for this author?

Nice

Looking forward to more

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Great so far. So Atlas is Sirius' son? That's interesting...Anyways, i hope he will be able to improve quickly with the System's help. He needs to be much stronger to protect heather and himself...

Thanks for the chapter. I cannot wat fir the next chapter, also hope he doesn't get overwhelmed too quickly by the Death Eaters. They may be Pure Blooded Idiots, but they're skilled and experienced pure blooded idiots

Amazing