Comments of chapter undefined of Divine Son Reincarnated With A Domination System
Divine Son Reincarnated With A Domination System
Deltta
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Honestly.. I feel like this fight doesn't have much depth or logic, and i will point out why. 1. Tang Yin's cultivation is much, much higher, several realms higher, so it doesn't make any sense for him to even be hit, let alone thrown back. His mind is Divine, his reflexes much faster, and overall a superior being. And yet, he is pathetic, and getting scared for nothing. 2. A Law is a Law, a concept, not cultivation, and it should only be used to the level that their cultivation allows for. The Heir of Deth being able to contend with Tang Yin's cumulated power is absurd, when taking into account his Law of Control. 3. That strong blow he gave to the Elder should have disintegrated his body, after all, MC is strong enough to contend with 8000 higher world cultivators, and yet he is fighting a small little god in a lower world, and barely damaging him. 4. The Law of Deth should only be dangerous if it touches you, and if it cannot, what would matter is a person's own cultivation. Control neutralizes it, so it should be a contest of cultivators, which feels pathetic if this is all Tang Yin can do at his level. With these points added up, it feels to me that you're trying to force a fight between equals, when they're simply not. There's no longer any distinction between cultivation ranks, and it feels like a forced brawl between a panicked kid and some OP monster... Like the roles have been reversed. I could have accepted if he could have used the Law of Deth to absorb the attacks and erase them, and yet he took a full powered attack with his body with barely any damage. Absurd and hard to believe, also inconsistent.
As I say, it's not just not falling into the cliché; it's doing something different from what we're used to; it's a different concept of the cultivation world. The Tang Yin Higher Realms are just one galaxy in a whole universe. They haven't even understood the concept of 'Immortality', so naturally, they are far removed from what it means to face an Heir of a Primordial Law. They control a Primordial Law, which was born together with the universe; how could they be basic beings? I can tell you that they are not governed by the normal Laws of the World, and there is a very important reason for this to be so. It is true that a Law is governed by the concept it represents; in all the novels that is so, and in this one, naturally, it is so too, but from the beginning, I am trying to use different concepts for each important thing in my novel, it is not to avoid falling into cliché, it is simply because I like to create new things and here the Primordial Laws are more important than you think.
B0mbaCl0ck:One thing is to not go for cliches, another to completely ignore the gap in cultivation realms. Like.. How can the heir even see Tang Yin? And how can Tang Yin not see every movement of the heir? A Law acts on the concept it represents, it doesn't magically make you faster, stronger, etc... or boost your mental capacity. What is even cultivation? Just ammassing spiritual power? That's flimsy..