Comments of chapter undefined of Twilight: Return of Vengeance

Thanks! I like that you’re expanding on the supernatural elements of Twilight. Honestly it didn’t make sense for there only to be vampires and isolated pockets of shapeshifters. After all, there has to be another supernatural sect similar in power to vampires or else the volturi would have taken over the world long ago. I like this addition

Fight was good, if the MC is stronger, it should be quick and simple. Adding other "worlds" to this world? Sounds good, hope it mashes up well, and it should be fine as long as the world are matching: Underworld? Could fit, even different type of vampires is plausible. Hellsing? Doesn't fit, power level off the chart, to dark, hard to mashup with the other supernaturals. Supernatural? Could work... ish.

You need to give him a catch frase, he’s the spirt of vengeance!!! I understand thet you took the spirt out of it but you still need a catch frase when judging the eve doers… it will give him more character. I thank you for your story, I love it.

I thank you for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

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awesome chapter

A little curious if the reason he felt this corrupt soul so far away is because its part demon or does he have a range on his senses? Hope he isn't too hard on Emmet and Jasper, they never tried to invoke terror or pain when they killed they were just hungry.

Great chapter.

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thxs for the chap

nice chapter

thnkx for the chapter