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Comments of chapter undefined of IN Harry Potter With a System

Logain_Septimus
Logain_SeptimusLv1Logain_Septimus

I don't usually hate. But the fic has changed somewhere in the 20-40 chapter range and doesn't feel like Harry Potter but random cultivator bs. I like some cultivation fics but it really doesn't fit in here. Thanks for the story so far though was a fun read.

Logain_Septimus
Logain_SeptimusLv1Logain_Septimus

Also your lack of a synopsis and tag indicating cultivation is annoying.

Ethan_Smith_8322
Ethan_Smith_8322Lv3Ethan_Smith_8322

Wouldn’t this get rid of the horcrux.

Liioo
LiiooLv4Liioo

taking too long 😪 honestly unnecessary flexing whats next some young masters wanting to cripple his cultivation?

Kane_Storer
Kane_StorerLv3Kane_Storer

This has gone from a harry potter fanfic to a cultivator one? Bro why

Reistlan
ReistlanLv3Reistlan

Ok. That's it. I'm drop this here.

Binge_Reader69
Binge_Reader69Lv1Binge_Reader69

... Its a quill, wtaf

DarkWolf_27
DarkWolf_27Lv11DarkWolf_27

Taking wayyy to long and tbh at this point your talking a whole lot of nonsense 35 bloody chapters and your ain’t even got on the bloody train yet

DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14DeejaeSutherland

I hate how this novel is heading, I'm also hating how I was able to predict all of this.

Pingui0510
Pingui0510Lv4Pingui0510

so the horcrux in his scar is obliterated

Hayate559
Hayate559Lv14Hayate559

since it's made of Hedwig's feather then "Valkyrie"

Readtilltheybleed
ReadtilltheybleedLv10Readtilltheybleed

Tribulation lightning… 😓😮‍💨

Lv2

Fulmer, it is the latin word for lightning, thunderbolt, flash, and sudden disaster

Anonny_Anonymous
Anonny_AnonymousLv1Anonny_Anonymous

I don’t like the intervention by the God or the extorting you for favors.

Koloja
KolojaLv2Koloja

The old evil skies come anywhere

AlexPendragon
AlexPendragonLv1AlexPendragon

thanks for the chapter... have a nice day

moon_pie_9428
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Noah_Thomas_0343
Noah_Thomas_0343Lv4Noah_Thomas_0343

u should totally make a grimore to go with it

hlh987655321
hlh987655321Lv4hlh987655321

thank you for the awesome chapters so far and I hope you have a wonderful week

DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14DeejaeSutherland

I freaking knew it, we wouldn't even make it to Hogwarts before the author made up his mind.

moon_pie_9428
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