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Comments of chapter undefined of World Travel Simulator System In Modern Society

Bloom759
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TheQuestionMark
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This first chapter is excellent at mobilizing the readers' emotions, and initially introducing the plot of the story, but there is a very big flaw in the logic of the world's background. It is impossible to be a modern world the way society has been described, it has been described that "transcendents" are fighters and they are the only beings with human rights, and non-transcendents doesn't even have the right to study, nor does they have basic human rights. Such a society is possible, but not a modern society: in such a society there are no engineers, doctors, high-yield agriculture, computers, cell phones... I suggest that a portion of this chapter be rewritten.

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ABHI_9013
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thanks for the chapter

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One_Singularity
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Thanks for the chapter ~

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Mingso_
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a good start, (⁠^⁠^⁠)

Gabichu_Yeah
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Was it necessary for the MC to be so useless? I mean, an average character is much more interesting than a "I was a nobody and rose from the bottom of society" nah, That sounds like a 15-year-old's idea. It's somewhat attractive for teenagers but for a slightly older audience, honestly the plot is... Well, you can imagine I suppose

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Dragonel23
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Sounds fun🎉🎉

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Shadow_Boy_9847
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thx for the chapter

DaoistpUhIZ2
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good start