Parshant_Morwal
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Ooofff, first page grammar errors are tough to ignore.
The grammar needs correcting.
Im worried about that father.
If English isn't your language and you want to translate your work to it please find someone you know to help you or hire an editor it will make the story more enjoyable
as a fellow man of culture I must read
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
So mc won’t have any magical talent till chapter 149/150?
Sorry, I can't read this. It feels like a report the way you write.
preggo's FTW!!!
Will the English get better?
Bueno tratare de llegar al 150 ojalá esta 18 horas gratis me alcancen jaja
Holy guacamole, this first chapter was horrendous, the writing was atrocious, almost gave me a migraine.
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