mythoast
Ah, i know you want to drag the story a bit but he's not acting like a "Conqueror" at all. He got into a fight with a ton of thug with weapon but couldn't anticipate a dirty play from Hanamiya when he did it for the 2nd time. I like the story and all but if he's acting like a 2nd rate mc. I don't think the title should be "The Conqueror... ..."
I understand what youâre trying to do but honestly feel you dragged it out too much and no matter how it ends it will still feel a little disappointing because of that. For example instead of an entire quarter to do anything or it even working more then once, you shouldâve had them use a new trick everytime with mc never falling for the same trick twice. Also I think the âheâs saving stamina to train laterâ bit was honestly just a complete miss and felt like a bad excuse for what is happening. Last but not least the mcâs attitude just felt bad honestly, I mean I know itâs supposed to come off as cool but just felt really lame to me. I would like to end this extremely tiny paragraph off by saying I donât have any malicious feeling and just really like the story so far so any amount disappointment i feel just gets multiplied.