YunokRyuk
Hey bro you are doing really great being a new Author but please add some new ARC from your own imagination in the story. & please dont misunderstand what i'm about to tell.... Its only been 28 chapter and MC has already become sequence 7...dont you think that pace of the story is going very fast...Please create some new arc by your own imagination for the MC like going to some ruins or tarot club memebers joining and fighting enemies or going to new places outside of Backlund ...What i'm trying to tell is that please let us show how MC is fighting with other high beyonders becozz all im seeing is he was able to kill all the beyonders easily till now so we are not able to see the MC capability, thinking prowess, and battle strategy while fighting sequence 5 or 4 even if he doesnt win or flee but please show us some action sequences where he is able to show his battle poweress becoz all im seeing till now is he is killing left and right everyone easily, drinking potion and attending some beyonder gatherings .....And if it continues like this then the fanfic will already be over within 200 chapters...