Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel: Angel

thx for the chap

stupid story, you get so long in your dialogue that you forget what you were doing or forgetting to put something in it, like first of all, when did he pass out, because all of a sudden he waking up from whenever he fell asleep, and when he was walking to the dinner room, he some how already ate and is now practicing in his room, there is not order to this Asian Novel.

how does 100 jump from 100k? why do story like this always make the prices so ridiculously high? just make it where he only has a certain amount of coins he can get weekly, like say...50 weekly so change it to 500$ for every coin, one coin 24 hour guaranteed, common: 10. rare: 120. epic: 220 legendary: 500, so that the prices are actually realistic but not easily attainable, seeing how 500$ is one and a half paychecks every two weeks, and seeing he can't just waste his money like that, but if his family is rich then i say 1500$ would equal the same realistic view especially so if it's just for one coin, and the prices for the draws make a lot of sense and causes the Mc not being able to just continue to draw cards.

Reading!