Comments of chapter undefined of A life with the Author
A life with the Author
Emmanuel_Capricorn
Chapter comments23
thanks for the chapters~ I love the story, I love the characters (maybe a bit yandere-ish for what their original character were, but not to the point where it puts me off. they still feel like their original character so no problems.) maybe a lack of male characters ? (but I guess the other readers would get PTSD flashbacks every time they interact with the female cast... so really it's okay.)
I can't think of a flaw and that's something given how involuntarily mean I can be sometimes when reviewing. Pacing, characterisation, balancing the mc, relationship growth, character tension are all excellent. POVs are spaced nicely and amplify main mc POV when they are done. despite all this, the writing growth between reading chapter 20 and 99 is noticeable. I really look forward to the rest of your writing career. Now that you have a clear natural writing style and ability to keep a plot fresh and exciting, an original work will definitely be way easier to write. If you do an original work please be aware of how predatory webnovel contracts are before you sign with them. (they'd have the right to your work and the right to replace you anonymously with no reason without informing readers. all for way less money than self publishing on amazon with royalroad and patreon/kofi or something). daily updates and your writing skills will put you on rising stars on royalroad which if you handle well with patreon (or kofi since patreon is sinking apparently) can mean $5k a month once you leave rising stars or trending quite feasibly. I think Zogarth left trending with Primal hunter at $18k. the real money obviously comes from publishing at the end but patreon/kofi is a good for stable income. check the patreons of any of the successful authors with a foundation on RR. pa. t re. o n.c o m/Zogarth is on 43k usd a month rn and thats not even the highest.
Thank you for your work. I discovered your story yesterday and I've read all the chapters in less than 10 hours hahaha, honestly it's much better than I expected. You write very well, the way you use words really shows how you plan and dedicate yourself to the story. the only thing I would really suggest, or rather ask a lot, is that you don't accumulate multiple girls, the current three as love interests is already good. Quality over quantity, When you start to have a lot of people, you lose a lot of your charm and it just seems like you're there to fulfill someone's fetish.
This novel is very good, I like it, Please make a novel with MC SINBAD from the magi anime,make Sinbad have slightly short hair, unlike in the original anime which is very long,which has system powers,and also has the original power in the anime... the power from the magi world,namely JIN's power, but without equipment like in the anime... so Sinbad doesn't need to wear various flashy accessories ,make sinbad come from the modern world and can go to the magi world at any time, and to other anime worlds,like anime Naruto, High School DXD, One Piece,Demon Slayer etc..also make the Modern world in Japan a combination of various anime, such as the Kengan Ashura anime... so later Sinbad can show his strength in the modern world, also other anime such as Shokugeki no Souma,Komi-san,Sono bisque doll(Marin kitagawa,etc. Make Sinbad a king in the world of magic who can create modern civilization in his kingdom in anime magic, and also become a king/hokage who has his own territory in any anime world that sinbad visits, and make sinbad able to return to the modern world at any time, make the modern world a place just leave the original... also please make sinbad have a harem from various anime worlds,make MC Sinbad have many talents such as business and so on in the Modern world in Japan...and can buy an island that he controls himself🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
the writing is good, comparatively better to the other novels on this platform. the characters are fleshed out to a superb degree but the best part of this story is the plot. literally almost no author is willing to write ntr but you wrote it and spun it in a way that still gives suspense to a degree cus its clear she's talking him? the mystery is amazing so i'd rate this novel a solid 9, it would be 8 but because its you its a 9 ;)
