Comments of chapter undefined of A life with the Author

He should just make her his personal c*mduMp And tellher if she ever lets another man touchher then he wont even use her as a C*m dumpany more and will really never bother with her again

sho don't deserve nothing, she belongs to the streets. Seriously, I have no symp6for cheaters of either gender

So author san I suppose that's it for tsukimi? or will she be returning?

It's a bit disappointing, criminals, traitors should be punished accordingly.

I feel pure rage from this chapter and the one before it. and then I remembered I was replay God of war and there was a quote from kratos that came to mind “Anger is a weapon. If you control it, use it. You clearly cannot… Your anger — You can get lost in it.” and "Close your heart to their desperation. Close your heart to their suffering. Do not allow yourself to feel for them. They will not feel for you." I was about enter the dark emo period that I enter after being tricked into NTR stories but I feel nothing towards these scenes in this story anymore. Maybe I have grown as a character. Can't believe self-development can happen because of a fanfic and a video game. But not just a video game but one of masterpieces in the modern gaming industry. Ciao

It's good so far TBH...the NTR is. . Well.. Not that bad.. I read far worst than this a thousand times.. I like it when Author writes a pov chapter of other characters. ..

Thanks for the chapter

j hope they get together again in the future they have a deeper history in this story being friends since childhood

TFTC

Based on her thought process here, she's dangerously close to suicide or become a yandere

this one is for Mc not her

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Thanks for the chapter

great chapter

Thanks for the chapter