Darkness_Enjoyer
Can we leave out Eleanor's introduction style? It's starting to be an uncomfortable read. Other people's characters are also understandable. There's no need to explain how she/he made their entrance. And other girls liking astron is enough, their thoughts are disturbing 1 in 3 chap
I'm sure you've earned a lot of money already author, have you thought about commissioning an original cover? the one right now looks weird and clunky, the hands are merged with whatever the mc is holding, please give yourself some dignity as an author and commission a proper cover to represent your novel