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Comments of chapter undefined of reborn as the perfect original, with some tricks

Abdullah_Ebrahim
Abdullah_EbrahimLv13Abdullah_Ebrahim

Nice writing keep going

Avarath123
Avarath123Lv4Avarath123

I don’t understand why you thought that plan was successful. Did you forget they had superhuman senses and can hear what’s going on as far as the next village? They should’ve heard every single interaction Ethan had and pieced together that things did not go as he claimed.

NOR19
NOR19Lv3NOR19

Yes, of course, as if they don't have super hearing.

EvilPenguin_666
EvilPenguin_666Lv4EvilPenguin_666

The_Uchiha_Ghost
The_Uchiha_GhostLv2The_Uchiha_Ghost

You need to edit some parts but overall it's good just get grammarly or something