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Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: Adventure of a Lifetime

NumbLove
NumbLoveLv5NumbLove

I felt that I was reading a British Kid

fedi_mdaini
fedi_mdainiLv4fedi_mdaini

look author we're all big boys here. gives us yamato and robin as female leads and everyone will be happy. ps: love the fic

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Wassup_0149
Wassup_0149Lv13Wassup_0149

Had to skip the majority of the chapter, please don’t use this dialogue , nobody speaks like that I promise you

TheJayPlay
TheJayPlayLv4TheJayPlay

If u r talking about tone and language I think it's just fine but don't overdo it .OrU can use that tone for some dialogue reference .Or U can use that tone for short answers.And as always it was a good chapter.

Kaydo_XD
Kaydo_XDLv3Kaydo_XD

I can't picture them speaking like that

Zariel_aod
Zariel_aodLv4Zariel_aod

I was schocked reading with that slang but its alright … if writing normally is easier fr u go fr it

Wingdash
WingdashLv4Wingdash

Terrible slang disgusting

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StaringCat
StaringCatLv3StaringCat

hey Author, you won't always write with this style, right? I mean, at least just in this arc (village). cuz idk, for someone who's still learning English, I still have difficulty in reading and understanding all of those words.

lnsomniac_
lnsomniac_Lv4lnsomniac_

Bro went from sounding like a scholar documenting his findings to sounding like a cowboy telling his friends about his epic adventures.

TheLittleGirl
TheLittleGirlLv13TheLittleGirl

Went from basic american to "Bri'ish".

mertlafy
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Username48399
Username48399Lv14Username48399

Thanks for the chapter

Jwebreader
JwebreaderLv1Jwebreader

C'est bien. C'est juste ce qu'il faut.