If u r talking about tone and language I think it's just fine but don't overdo it .OrU can use that tone for some dialogue reference .Or U can use that tone for short answers.And as always it was a good chapter.
hey Author, you won't always write with this style, right? I mean, at least just in this arc (village). cuz idk, for someone who's still learning English, I still have difficulty in reading and understanding all of those words.