Palpable_Banana
Palpable_Banana:There's not any reason besides me wanting some practice writing my own characters. While I am passionate about this fanfic, I want to write my own novel at some point.
Root has to prevent it from being aware of it. If you ignore the root completely, half of the Naruto universe goes to waste. It would be ridiculous if he even remembers the mizuku and not the danzo. and yes, danzo is constantly watching the school and the village. Even if he is not in the first year, he will still try to meet a talented young person, even if he waits until he graduates. he shouldn't take too much
Author I think you shouldn’t have used a template or reincarnation for this novel especially for a Naruto fanfic. Your readers will headcannon think that the Mc should 1 shot every opponent or think that he should be the smartest person in the world when it’s further from the true. Naruto characters are smarter then real life people and it’s hilarious how people fail to realize this. You have 6 year olds who understand the entire world situation like Itachi that exist. You have characters like Orochimaru who from a young age sought knowledge to the highest degree. He obtain immortality and knows almost every jutsu, this is without reincarnation knowledge. A lot of these readers really think that an average reincarnator human can survive or make a difference when that’s impossible. Almost every fanfic reincarnator isn’t a true athlete or train killer so how can they succeed in a world where the only way to make a difference is to train and fight all day. There’s no phones, video games or light novels for entertainment, how can someone’s previous mindset of not being a person who lives in the gym working out not be a factor. The reason these characters train so much is from birth they are wired by their surroundings that this is the only way to live. This is obviously not the case for reincarnators whatsoever.