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Comments of chapter undefined of SPARTAN Trapped in the MCU

alef_Rilzaki
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If I had to use one word to describe this story it would be boring, with no character development, almost no real interaction with other characters, the MC looks like a robot following a schedule, the good thing is that he has a goal, but it's an objective so pointless it's kind of a universal domination that can evolve into multiversal, as everyone always seems to fear his group after a demonstration of their skills, I'm not saying it's a bad story it's actually interesting at the beginning but the story doesn't seem to evolve in fact, always the same explanation about technology in every chapter or almost all or other unnecessary explanations about how the Halo universe is evolved in comparison to others, by extension its military group, which is repeated a few times during the story to the point of making the chapters look very similar to each other, there's no romance and there's no drama and there's no emotion, there doesn't seem to be any motivation behind his goals, the agent doesn't know why he wants to do all this, it seems like those typical stories of human domination but without the exaggerations of how humans are superior or at least it is not described explicitly, the story gives you this feeling that the MC thinks humans are superior, the best, the dominant race dominating everything with their technology and ingenuity. Anyway, I just didn't like the story, I like the emotional aspect of a story, romance, happiness and anger and hatred, this story is extremely dry and emotionless.

Sykocyrus
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i appreciate your criticism and will try to implement more interactions with other characters. as far as human supremacy goes that is the halo universe. humans vs everyone else so of course he will have that logic, its kinda their thing. the emotion does come in later chapters, i include tech details due to halo universe is highly advanced weaponry therefore it is important, i will try to reduce tech info a bit. i don't consider myself a author, more of story teller, i am undecided on harem or if he will just have multiple lovers. i hope you enjoy the rest of story and will take your opinion into consideration and try to improve upon it. thank you for the comment

JudgeFate_18
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Thanks for the chapter

Somnifer
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Thanks for the chapter!