Comments of chapter undefined of Guardian of the Pacific: The Incredible Adventures of the Giant Turtle

A very good start, and very good caption of the emotional storm that would affect anyone normal by being in that situation

thanks for the chapters hope the chapters get longer with more detail later

I am not hating on your work just trying to explain what I see when I read this. anyway it is an interesting story so keep it up and in the end all that matters is that you enjoy writing it.

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

Interesting start

good start

good start

Thxs for the chap

Its to shot man

Obrigado pelo capítulo

Thanks for the chapter