Comments of chapter undefined of The Shadow Oath

What a fantastic first chapter! I love the character right now, the descriptions are vivid and although I don’t understand the prisoners full situation yet, it’s realistic in the given context. The interaction with the Tsukuyomi was pretty introspective as well proving valid points against Kazuki’s descision and options, causing him to weigh them both and collide with honor and justice. Unlike most stories where the mc just hurriedly accepts such a power. However, I am curious as to why Tsukuyomi gave him these powers. Only time will tell, however.

Why is this so beautifully worded. I wish I could write half as good as this

Kazuki Ange toward his enemies keeps me going ...Keep going and I recommend to novelist [img=coins][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Moneybags]

Great start coach, keep it up!

There are many expectations that I'm feeling, but you didn't disappoint! I thought it would be a meh novel that I read, but yeah! I like the way it starts, and the mystery you've put in this chapter is amazing! I appreciate the attention to detail in describing how the character feels(⁠.⁠ ⁠❛⁠ ⁠ᴗ⁠ ⁠❛⁠.⁠)

The first chapter was amazing, not usually my type of novel because of how serious it is but it's very well executed and keeps me interested. I also love how easy it is to read♥️

the way you build the world of your story was really good. When I am reading a certain story I tend to visualize the authors description. You have written it in a manner that I can imagine the world your trying to build up. I can also feel the pain and anger of your lead. Nice work

Samurai you say??? shiiiing shiiiiing! Nice first chapter btw

Great first chapter!😁

Author is very poetic and deep^^ I like how you narrate the story!

This was a 10/10 first chapter! Perfect setting description, perfect character introduction and perfect flow of writing as well! It really gets me hyped for the next chapters!

What a great way to start the novel. Totally loved the first chapter. Author I wish you good luck for the future.

The writing has great flow and have gotten instantly hooked!! love your way of describing your surrounding and the use of sensory descriptors.

First chapter is already so detailed and well written. Hope Tsukuyomi treat Kazuki kindly