Moonlee_xx
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This is one the best stories I have read yet! 🤩 It’s a shame it only has 5 chapters. The flow of the story is perfect. 👌The character descriptions are amazing. The plotline is developed incredibly well!!👏 I was so immersed in the story that I was disappointed there were no chapters! 🥹 Your writing is absolutely top notch! I’m really looking forward to this one! It has amazing potential! 🤭Keep up the great work author! 💪🤩
- Moonlee_xx10mthCommentedAfter crying everything out, Artemis lifted her head and pulled away slightly so she could look at Jayce. She soon realized in horror that her ugly crying had left Jayce's shirt wet and full of snot.
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Awwww Jayce best boy
Artemis felt shell shocked. Her world inside was collapsing. She couldn't believe that the monster who had been haunting her dreams was dead. And that the man next to her was the one who killed him. Artemis felt tears falling down before she knew it - Moonlee_xx10mthCommented
I think it’s better to just say “he went mad”, it’s rare to see the word “madded”
"My brother died two months ago. I put him down, taking over the Tasis Pack. He went madded because someone in our pack was giving him small doses of wolfbane and silver. I had been overseas for the last three years when this was happening…It seemed they had been using him as a puppet over those three years, causing harm in the region… - Moonlee_xx10mthCommented"And if he's in pain, he can always hold my hand." Xander added, appearing next to Artemis and Jayce.
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Poor Jayce he’s trying hard
"Sorry, sweetheart. That's my fault. I grabbed them when Xander was putting the ointment away after I refused it." Jayce exclaimed, tucking on the side of the bandage. "I thought it was best if I covered part of my face so you wouldn't have to see Louis in me…" - Moonlee_xx10mthCommented
Jayce is kinda nice…
Jayce frowned. "You weren't overeating. You were just trying to protect yourself. I get my brother must have…cause you a lot of pain…and with our alikeness…it's easy to misunderstand…" - Moonlee_xx10mthCommented
I’m assuming it’a cuz they’re mates 🙄
Artemis felt some of her fear disappearing, her inner wolf loving the way he said her name. She felt relaxed and somehow safe…however, she couldn't figure out why. - Moonlee_xx10mthCommented
Poor girl
I guess I overestimated myself. I wasn't ready for this…I don't- - Moonlee_xx10mthCommented
Hot showers are the best!!
Artemis sighed in relief, the hot water warming her body, making her anxious thoughts leave her like the steam rising. After washing herself, Artemis got out of the shower, wrapping a towel around her wet hair. - Moonlee_xx10mthCommented
Food is always first!
"Alright. I understand but we can sort that out later. Right now, we need to make dinner." Xander replied, pulling out a brown bag from the fridge. - Moonlee_xx10mthCommentedArtemis loved playing baseball and had a mean swing, a monster when it came to batting. He had also taught her some self-defense to rebuild her confidence after her parents' death. And it seemed like she had finally been able to use her skills, even if they were on the wrong person.
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The pack is honourable 👏
"I know that, Artemis." Xander sighed. "And I've already consulted the pack about it. They're all in agreement that breaking this bond is okay if you're not ready for it. They're willing to accept whoever becomes my mate as the Luna of the pack. Even if it's not you." - Moonlee_xx10mthCommented
Is there like a big age gap?
He heard more rustling and the door opened quickly, Artemis appearing before him. Looking down at her, he realized how small she was. How much she had grown over the last two years. - Moonlee_xx10mthCommented
He cares about her!
Xander wanted things to go back to the way they were before. He wanted to help Artemis grow and find her own mate, not become her mate. Even if he had wrong feelings about her, yearning to be hers. Wanting to be her everything. - Moonlee_xx10mthPosted
An absolute gem!! 🤩 This novel is just way too good! The plotline is very well developed and the character relationships are funny and enjoyable!🤭 The setting and systems are well explained and overall it’s a really easy read! A few warnings on the dark content 🤯 but the story in itself is well written! Great work Author! Keep it up! 👏💪🫡