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Comments of chapter undefined of Mahouka, Rebirth as Tatsuya

Raul_Romero
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One observation is that it feels like the typical fics that start in the first chapters to imagine a way to change the world with advances etc, too rushed and too impulsive, I think the last time I read the LN was 10 years ago, but still I remember that the precaution the Yotsubas have was too unjustified, if his own members do not grow rebellious, someone who is the own son of the main branch would have even less reason to grow rebellious, or perhaps from the beginning he would be treated so unfairly that he could only end up in rebellion? very illogical. The AI ​​thing is not even so exaggerated in an era where you can create spells to counter it, my recommendation is to focus only on the personal, hes spell is so strong that you would only nerf it by distracting it with things that in cannon he no had another option due to his poor talent for others types of magics, another thing is that if he learns to control his emotions, it means that he learned to isolate them, which means that if they still force the emotional link with Miyuki, he would have no problem isolating it, so I hope you don't force that forced feeling just to give him an inconceivable weakness when he is already aware of the problem from the beginning, just have a natural siblings affections

Sky_Demon_Order
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What do you think? oh and I will add images tomorrow

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DaoistNS0dsQ
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Just discovered this fic. Wished I discovered it sooner tbh. Loved everything so far. Hope you show more moments between Tatsuya, Maya, Miya and Miyuki. Thanks for the chapter! Have my power stones

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DON_FLUFFLES
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Thanks for the chapter. Does Tatsuya has a love interest? If he does than who?

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Spectacular_Rebel
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Great chapter you get stones today

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OverlordBGs
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Great chapter

JcViper
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love it 👍👍👍😊😊😊

urdumb
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so will he be treated like he used to or this time better treatment ?

Chris_Ondigi
Chris_OndigiLv14Chris_Ondigi

Is Eisaku already dead ? since maya is now head of the family ?