They sometimes mix up her and him, but overall the story is absolutely fun to read! Highly recommend it!

Thanks for the chapter. I always look forward to your updates. Maybe MC should learn some self defense from Alan after this

This is basically A Demon Lord’s Hero by Fahad09. It can originally be found on fanfiction.net

….i caved and bought your Ptreon subscription. You’re too good at writing, man.

Thank you for the chapter! I caved and read the Winterhord Arc during my 2nd re-reading. It’s great as always!! Rrally excited for the insights into the Deerclops and Fae. PS. Is Ruby still doing ok??! I think they’re about to go to Mt Glenn for the mission right??

I haven’t read the latest arc yet since I hate cliffhangers, so I’ve been re-reading this fic. Gotta say man, you did a really great job writing this. Feels like it’s even better the 2nd time

Love it. This is canon now

I knew this fic was familiar! Do you mind dropping the title of the OG?

Love your fic so far. Your grammar and writing is great. Really hoping you give a happy ending to Ben too though, since I still have a slight soft spot for him as the OG MC

Love ur novel so far. I’m really curious to see how you’ll interact with Dawn and her family

Wait, no. Don’t make me choose!! I LOVE THEM BOTH

Love the interlude! Keep up the good work!! PS. Where do u want power stones to go? Here? Or to the Fate/Bloodborne fic?

I never read the original lol. I only tried reading it since I liked your other stuff, and the summary was pretty nice. 😅

Grammar is pretty good, especially when you compare it to other novels here. It’s a slice of life fic, so I’d recommend reading it if you were looking for something relaxing. Give it a shot

To be honest, I tried really hard to stick with it, especially since you like the work. But I kinda dislike Utaha’s attitude, so Imma be dropping this. I hope other people enjoy it tho

+1

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Don’t do any rewrites or changes. Your story has been an absolute blast to read, and I like the way you show his thoughts and emotions. You’re doing great!

I’ve loved everything about the story so far. Grammar is great, especially when you compare it to the other fics on WN. Story is slow-paced, and the author likes to expound a lot on background characters. I actually like it since it lets me learn more about the world. Also, the author likes adding images to the story, so yay! Overall, highly recommend giving it a try

Just discovered this fic. Wished I discovered it sooner tbh. Loved everything so far. Hope you show more moments between Tatsuya, Maya, Miya and Miyuki. Thanks for the chapter! Have my power stones