nexusstar21
If you can separate the thoughts from the lines and highlight them in different ways, it would already help improve the story and make it easier to read.
Needs some serious grammar and punctuation fixes. Too mashed together at the moment to be an enjoyable read.
the mc probably will become too op and there won't be any good character development so don't waste your time reading this.
hey dont discourage mannnnb
I thank you for the chapter.
such sort chap
