CarlosDr3vna
So far the story is intriguing, but a couple of things bother me personally. First MCs name, it's like a child google searched for cool names in Greek, but I can live it with since it's not as important to the story. Second, why has the author addressed mc by white haired youth/ youth/ amnesiac etc. so often instead of usual he/him or name. Addressing a character by his characteristics is done rarely usually when pronoun or name is used repeatedly to give variety to writing. It shouldn't be used every time. It's making me cringe a bit. Anyways that's just my opinion. Keep up the good work author.