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Comments of chapter undefined of FrostBitten (Percy Jackson Fanfic)

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Decima99
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So far the story is intriguing, but a couple of things bother me personally. First MCs name, it's like a child google searched for cool names in Greek, but I can live it with since it's not as important to the story. Second, why has the author addressed mc by white haired youth/ youth/ amnesiac etc. so often instead of usual he/him or name. Addressing a character by his characteristics is done rarely usually when pronoun or name is used repeatedly to give variety to writing. It shouldn't be used every time. It's making me cringe a bit. Anyways that's just my opinion. Keep up the good work author.

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Mitchell_Moroni
Mitchell_MoroniLv4Mitchell_Moroni

Thanks for the new chapter also how does this dude know the melting point of bronze like such a random tidbit of knowledge either way again thanks

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DeejaeSutherland
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the bow is probably made out of Greek Bronze, a type of magical metal, or Bone Bronze(I Think It was called) a type of bronze mixed with ancient bones along with blood to create a divine weapon.

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DragonkingKyo
DragonkingKyoLv6DragonkingKyo

thanks for the chapter

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PhantomNite629
PhantomNite629Lv15PhantomNite629

thx for the chap

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EvilPenguin_666
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AvidReader962
AvidReader962Lv14AvidReader962

Thanks for the chapter

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WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story.