Devils_hand
What I can say about the story is that you took away the essence of most of the characters, an example of that would be what you did with Hinata, I can assure you that you don't like Hinata, what you like about her is her body or something like that because of personality nothing, not even the Hinata From Road to Ninja is as unpleasant as this My opinion
i didn't get it... in the previous chapters (i don't remember the exact one) anyway when naruto inject his cells in random man and it killed him he said that no only the one's with otsutsuki bloodline can hold it or something and now there's hundred of them with his bloodline ?? the whole cells thing just let me drop it because if power was that easy to gain just with cells there won't be fu**ing ninja training just labors and there u go jounin rank everywhere u just make it worse than ever