Devils_hand
I don't know about everyone but hinata is one of my most favourite female character in Naruto, she is always kind , gentle, shy and timid especially around Naruto, but also have the courage to face a fearsome opponent to save naruto. Her determination to stand beside the Naruto is motivating.Their love is like gentle notes of a romantic music, soothing to ears, last but not the least- her beautiful smile, watching her smile could heal hearts. But congratulations, you ruined it all.. (Just kidding , altho I don't like this hinata even a little , I also know this is a ff , so yeah characters can change)
Hlo author san as you know in anime and manga the hinata father and sister love her so much but her father cant show his affection to her and hanabi always loved her sister so you could have kept it same and shown that the hyuga elders are bad makes hiashi to force there judgment kind of thing and rather than hurrying and totally changing hinata personality making naruto inspire and help her grow slowly kepping her kind and gentle personality same but makeing her strong and awaken the tennsigen like eyes and power in emergency situation kind of thing makeong her supress elders and making her clan heiress working hard for removal of curse seal and main and branch family difference would have elevated her and made the fanfic more interesting this kind of feels like its going to fast without any sense the chapter from starting are good but for some reason the after naruto entered village it became pointless and even if you change thing bcz this is fanfic you are creating whole different things which makes it useless and disinterested to read and there is cringe you should have made them develop their love moving slowly and sakura trash resentment good but no that much hype in her resentment its just like touches thats alll overall i am losing interest in reading this bcs of to much change and cring and story plot non existing this is just my opinion thank you oh and i hate this hinata she is not queen but she is right now like sakura the trash
The powerup is to weird. From reading its seems the hoe has gravity powers, you should have just left it working only on hyuga's which would sort of make sense considering the fact that you used the bloodline excuse again. You got to stay consistent. Plus hinata shouldn't even know what the vacuum palm is. The chakra increase would make sense but knowing techniques she hasn't even seen or used us taking it too far.