Comments of chapter undefined of FATE: My Mother is King Arthur

MC attitude is fine but he keeps babbling on more than necessary that I couldn't understand what he is trying to say for example : the iron hand asks the MC where did he get the gun and he's respond is incomprehensible. MC really needs that final adjustment. Lastly, comedy is something I didn't really liked in the last part. It really felt like comedy came at the price of making MC incompetent or too goofy. At Least that's what I felt from this chapter. I have never been fan of author making jokes at the price of making MC look dumb, incompetent, and unreliable. Of course comedy part is my own Bias take so, You can take it as grain of salt.

Thanks for the chapter.

Good start.

Good first chapter

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yep feels like a crack-fic.

thank you

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁 👍

A little underwhelming for a first chapter, but let's see where this goes.

Reading!

definitely a nice start

:)