Comments of chapter undefined of Grave borne Revenant

It wasn’ to bad I’ll read more and decide if it is worthy

Your opening chapter holds promise with its intriguing premise of a character waking up in an unfamiliar place with no memories. To enhance it, consider adding more sensory details for a vivid setting. The concept of changing writing language is fascinating but could be smoother. Details about the room's size and contents could benefit from more vivid descriptions. The introduction of a desk with papers adds intrigue. The transition between knocking at the door and the protagonist's thoughts could be smoother, and the last sentence seems incomplete. With these improvements, your story can engage readers even more effectively. Keep up the excellent work, and the story will intrigue its audience.