The chapter is great. However, as a viewer, I found it awkward. I literally listened to thr song as I read this to immerse myself. It was neat and fits him.
I'd love it if you could have him play Drug Dealer by Macklemore when he gets famous. Or maybe some of his other songs, Macklemore almost OD'd and has been recovering from it for a couple years so his songs might be something you are looking for.