Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece : My Revenge

i guess this novel started and ended with one piece this is more than 10 chapters already of rubbish

It's very, very boring, the entire arc in the naruto world is rubbish.

Arco do mundo Naruto é uma porcaria completa, perda de tempo, Autor, saia logo dele e avance para outros mais legais. Ta uma DOR.

author-san sure knows how to puff up his word count. he used one chapter too many for this misunderstanding. sigh.

Okay im dropping this, the author was doing a somewhat good job at the beginning but he is somehow able to make a interesting character so passive and aloof that the story just falls flat. Many other authors does this when they start to focus more on the other characters. The author hasn’t done this, but somehow made the mc seems like a reader and watcher of his own story. And therefore undermining the mc character development and or growth, instead we get an unresponsive character thats hard to understand or connect with. And makes his responses or decisions seem ”forced or withheld” its an annoying aspect that I really don’t like.

I'm even having deja vu here, and wondering that the author is the same author of the book "The Strongest Omni Traveler" with a different account, where the protagonist became a beta/idiot after his first wife (a Goddess yet to be above, and is also the daughter of the God Emperor), left because she is so powerful that she could not stay in the mortal world, because of not destroying the universe

good chapter keep it up

Thank you for the chapter. It was amazing

thanks for the chapter