OutBoxer024
I just have a couple of questions. there is a part where it is mentioned that he is gathering wind attribute mana Who exactly said this?. my other question is about the 5000 years issue. in the original version of this fanfic arnos directly realizes from this information that he is not in his own world but in another. in this version when he investigates or rather tries to invoke his castle he realizes that it is not possible because the following distant. that information plus the fact that you have discovered that the story is so different shouldn't prove that you are in another world?
Honestly man, I think you should just make Anos's magic unique to him.. That will separate him to everyone, and also if Kathlyn is gonna fall for Anos, make it somewhat cute or whatever.. Especially him being a temporary student teacher and that will make her fall for him even more..(Sorta what Misha feels for Anos)