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Ese es el menor de los problemas.

I will give you the benefit of the doubt I will give you the benefit of the doubt Are you telling me that my lich creates a place for an entire race without this knowing who did it because again now this also contradicts that the indra were the ones who took their land from the outer world to the etheric plane besides this would imply that the militia itself created a place that is interfering with the natural order of the world and harming the world itself in the long run. To top it all off the indra can use very quote unquote divine power without it conflicting with the gods themselves.... Since you yourself are acknowledging that they are doing it without their help without their permission.

1.Even in milita's own world in the original story no one has proved a real adversary to arnos Even if the villains in tbate were to gain any modicum of knowledge of source magic It wouldn't do him much good since we would be talking about two beginners against someone who literally was the pinnacle of magic and still is to say the least. Arthur is receiving direct instruction from arnos himself which is an inordinate advantage on the other hand to be able to use ether as a weapon they don't rely directly on artifacts or asking permission from some sort of god directly the draconians worship the gods and so they can use their borrowed powers but those powers are not part of them. 2.The draconians can use the power of the gods through artifacts given by the Goddess of arcane selection the indrath. By the way the first thing I mentioned because at the end of the day arnos doesn't even have Rivals in his own story that's a fact this I said this in response to your comment that it would be very boring if it was all just about arnos and the reality is that it often ends up being that way especially in the beginning of the novel But the reality is that arnos is too far above the scale of his own world, Even in the deep worlds facing inviolable seas you can tell that arnos is holding back.

that is why I have already said that the idea of having combined both worlds into one was never a good idea and that it entailed many problems one after the other.

the problem with what you are proposing here is that by making both worlds share the same universe, tbate would inevitably end up looking even more trivial than it already does It is supposed to be because let's say that on the one hand it is true that when we take into account the arnos factor, all the threat posed by agrona or the dragons in the fiotus become trivial, but if we add characters from the Maougakuin novel, they become even more trivial. that represents agrona or the dragons in the fiotus become something trivial but if we add characters of the novel of Maougakuin they become even more trivialized and not only the villains but also the protagonists of the novel at the end would be arnos and any Ally that you can in the future against these villains. believe me i thought about that question, and the only thing that came to my mind was another question to top it all off and that is why didn't kanon prevent everything that has happened in these more than 8000 years because yes how nice that you recognize it because they have that 8000 years is very little time given the antiquity of the ashuras. But in that vast unknown period of time I go back and ask why kanon did nothing. Why did he not prevent the extermination of the different races that populated lacrea even before the djin. The draconians in the original story their home the underworld was created by militia if you want to make the indra clan members a direct equivalent to the draconians then shouldn't they have had some sort of interaction with the Goddess of creation if so shouldn't they be more humble to know that there is a being unreachable in power to them?. Also what have I been doing Shin, what became of the Spirits and what happened to the demons. And the most important question now we know that the creation of fiotus alone significantly altered the natural order of nature in the world of tbate why no God has laid a finger on the ashura when they similarly left us only that much more aberrant consequences to the natural order of their world have altered the natural order of their world.

Literally the only thing that fits is the order of time that we know has what is a physical representation or manifestation which is the Guardian gods of time. Space naturally also has to have a Guardian God or a God that embodies its or that order however there are many concepts of which we do not even know what they look like and are called their gods. Here you are already making a mistake and that is that the order of destruction and the order of creation are two different orders from each other. As for the aspect of destiny, which in the case of the ether already has a manifestation that came out in the last chapters, in the case of the order we know that all the gods manipulate destiny. The draconians do not use Divine magic what they do is to invoke a God and use the power of this borrowed God the dragons that use the ether are using the ether without having to borrow it from someone else And to top it off it is not divine magic when the effects that this can do can be achieved and even better with magic of common use of the militia world.

I understand that people who make fanfic can get to dislike that someone instead of praising their work you criticize them Believe me I have written and I have also been criticized some aspects of my work but when that happens I try to correct it I invest my time in improving what I do because I also write for Hobby but if I am going to write something for but if I am going to write something to share it with others I feel obligated to deliver something that shows some effort. I'm not telling you to blindly listen to all the criticisms you get, everyone can be wrong, I myself can be wrong about something because personally I would prefer the plot to be focused on us, but even I know that's not possible.

Look I respect creative freedom But why did you go out of your way to respect the logic of the silver sea and then bring up things like creative freedom to justify such inconsistent changes in the structure of the two worlds?. believe me when I tell you that I really like your fic for many reasons such as character building, character interaction and how both magic systems are clashing. But my problem is precisely the world building that will end up causing many more problems.

Oh believe me I also criticized him but my criticism of his fic is limited to watpad where I discovered his fic and in his case from the beginning I didn't follow it. The case of your fic is different, I read the original version and its reboot started well. The problem was clear when you tried to merge both worlds (being the main problem) which proved not to work. Example the "8000 years" since his reincarnation. Do you know how old the ashuras are? They have seen races rise and fall older than the djin, kezes is not the first to use the name. There have been so many that they have already lost count. And eye we already know all about the origins of the ashuras, they simply can't exist in the same world as more powerful races like demons or spirits. And then there's the ether, how can that coexist with order?

Why review both novels when you have already mutilated the lore of both stories?

This is the maougakuin wiki with a compilation of spells seen and mentioned. How hard was it to find and place the dee cast?.

Because according to the author the world of tbate is militia in his fic.

8 thousand years is too short considering that the indrath clan carries many generations prior to kezes.

Hello ?

I have a question,Will the publication of chapters continue on Sundays?

In fact it could happen, even the Ashura don't know his true power and neither do the Alacryans, for everyone the most outstanding thing about him is his resurrection magic.

Finally, this meeting was what I was most looking forward to since, unlike Arthur Arnoa, he is in a position to negotiate with the indrath as an equal. And that's only because if he really wanted to, even in his current state, not even all of efiothus could say no to him.

It is a bit curious that he would find the spies infiltrated and later in the same chapter these same spies start attacking the academy which he is in charge of keeping safe.

Did you put this fic on hold?