Comments of chapter undefined of Spider-Verse: Creeping Hunger

this was the best chapter in the entire history of spiderman fanfics 😌🤣

This chapter was just... beautiful...A story about envy, determination, love, betrayal and heartbreak... truly, a masterpiece.

AUTHOR YOU PROMISED 2 CHAPTERS YOU HAVE LIED TO US!

man, this was the best chapter ever 🤣🤣🤣

also great chapter honestly very high quality 👌

you might need to make some chapters that are just about the rats now 😂

That was good. My mood was pretty bad after reading an annoying fanfic but reading this chapter was the cure.

I have given you my stones because the other marvel spider-man fic tht just uploaded gave a s**t chapter.

After that he was found by Master Splinter, who observed in him a similar one that was straying into the path of evil, hatred and revenge. He trained him and guided him along the path of light that moves in the shadow of the night, thus creating the greatest rat-lizard hybrid hero.[Google translator]

Writing about the escapades of a wayward pet can be fun, but you have to keep into account how it correlates to the rest of your story. It’s way too soon for the rat to be making it’s return debut, considering the flurry of activity it underwent in your writing. There’s simply no way for all that supposed activity to have happened. Phrases like “Since that day…”; “the first day..”, are simply nonsensical. Feeding off of many rats and numerous humans that he killed are just as impossible. Not to mention how he fed freshly hunted humans and rats to Wilma. The reason? It’s been less than 24 hours since he first escaped his cage after being injected, and only a few hours since Wilma escaped hers.

Gave 3 stones goal to be secobd in fanvalue good chap and yes

Esse capítulo foi bem inesperado e engraçado [img=recommend]

ele tinha que ter matado os outros 2 ratos agr tem 2 ratos mutante a solta

We have the P.O.V of the mouse . I didn’t know we need this

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁 👍

thx for the chap