Comments of chapter undefined of A JEDI IN WESTEROS

Im out its honestly a good idea but i cant see anything but a dead mc at this point only believable outcome to me he is subpar in luck and intelligence seriously holding the king hostage declaring himself a spy in the north surrounded by many lands and soldiers ready to kill him ravens will be sent everywhere dudes dead so stupid its cringe i want the mc dead at this point darwin award winning move dropping the saber. Sorry not for me when i see jedi in westeros i expect a bit op not the mentally challenged adventures of a dude with a lightstick but keep going well written i can tell many will like it.

i'm done too , can't believe i wasted my time that much , MC suck way way too much ,

nope you just ruined it

don't mean to be rude but that was just a bad idea

Reading this is giving me a migraine from annoyance i love the Idea of this fic but I cant enjoy it with this mc

I feel like I wasted the few power stones I have on this... sigh

why did you think it was a good idea for him to lose his only weapon and the only one of his kind and he can't replace it stupid very stupid and declare himself a spy that was even dumber

i love the story and the idea, you write well except for when you suddenly try to somehow make things happen without providing much sense to them. lord stark wouldn't just kill them after half listening, and the mc could've proven half the his story if he'd shown his lightsabre. and the way you simply added the word hastily to a sentence to justify something like losing the lightsabre. name me one time the lightsabre has suddenly dropped from the belt like that by itself... take my power stones and pls if you continue this story pls dont just disregard logic just for the story to get to the part you wanna get

Horrible

Yup I’m out as well wonderful idea terrible execution

u just became enemy number 1 for the whole westeros without his only trained style of weapon and his stupidity

Well you are choosing hard mode got it.Just hope you get something to help with those 50 points.cant have sith lightning but you can get electric judgement.Unlike sith lightning fueled by anger your would be fueled by determined justice.Weaker but still buy able option

i am done with this .

While. Good luck with this misunderstanding.

I suspect that people who enjoy this novel have serious brain damage. just like mc.

a dumb mc .......I like it.