prettydimple
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
Thanks so much for your support🙏🏾
Pretty good, but similar to what purp said, I can't really picture it. How old are the characters, and what are their surroundings? I think having more details on this stuff might keep more people around. Good writing flow tho.
Author, is this Eastern or West Historical? I struggle to imagine it.
