prettydimple
I just wish my ideas do not go to waste. Please read my writing 🙏
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I really love how the author didn't drag the plot for too long as least in the first six chapters I have read. The story is quite interesting from the onset and there is little to no grammatical mistake. I haven’t seen much of the male lead yet but I quite like the character of the female lead. She is not the usual cold reincarnated fl who is out for revenge at once, there is also a nice side to her and it seems she is taking time to adapt to her new surrounding first. You should certainly give this a read, I am sure it will grab your interest instantly just like it did mine.
Hello everyone, it is the Author’s review. I have put a lot of effort into this work and I have confidence that this work is definitely an interesting and captivating one. There is no perfect or black and white character and the side characters do not exist as a shadow of the main characters but they have their own stories and purpose. There is political strife and struggles, action, romance, love webs and lots of plot twists to be expected. Please give it a chance and you won’t be disappointed. ❤️
Quotation marks should be in front of correction
If would be better if you don’ include foreign phrases as your readers can’t understand what they are reading
I am not talented as a author myself but I just want to give you an advise. You need to stop writing for now and learn to use dialogue tags and punctuations. You are writing the dialogue with the descriptions causing the paragraphs to be too long and jumbled to the point where it is hard to understand what you are writing. If you go too far before anyone gives you this advise or before stopping and taking the time to actually learn writing format, it will be hard to correct the mistake when you realise then later. I am just advising you as a fellow author who started with no idea of how to properly write so please do not take this the wrong way. 😁
HIs character is of someone who wants to do something but is a coward. At times you can’t blame people like this 😫
Your review you made my day that has just begun, it feels really good to know that someone spent so much time reading my novel to the end. Although I cannot promise that the part 2 will be happening early this year due to my final exams in June and the need to stockpile before publishing. I can assure you that I will do my best to publish it as soon as I can. Still please watch out fo my new work that will be getting published soon.
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