Comments of chapter undefined of Pokemon: A life worth living
Pokemon: A life worth living
Nuclide
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Not sure if youâre still interested in continuing this, but I wanted to comment this is a top 5 pokefic for me, and Iâve probably read 100+. If you have it in you to continue, you would be doing us a huge favor. If you are struggling with plot points and how to write them, Iâd encourage you to slow down and lean into the slice of life aspect. For a story about a farmer you do tend to rush through major developments and give us updates after the fact. For content, those are a lot of scenes we would love to read and you would maybe find it fun and easier to write. At this point in the plot, you could do several chapters about any of the alolan variants and his experience with them. You have plenty of space to dive deep into poketech and making new ideas, etc. You did this well with the grafting and berries and home construction early on, but never really slowed down to that extent afterwards. Donât get me wrong this is a pleasure to read. But if you took a plot breath you may find the words come easier.
