Niggross
Why does this guy keep getting Japanese names for his character? It’s very cringe for a white guy even if he’s a case 53. Extreme chunni vibes. Also, I don’t like the MC bending over and taking it from the protectorate. He should have just walked. If thousands of villains get cart Blanche to act with impunity, so can the MC. He should have just skipped town. This is why I didn’t like the plot device of his “mother.” All it did was provide these people leverage over of the MC, forcing him first to be a slave to the ABB and now he’s a slave to Protectorate. I like your writing and I like the powers, but there isn’t a single redeemable thing about this story’s plot, the MC…practically everything is so ham-fisted.