Comments of chapter undefined of Unheard Wishes: A Tale of Desires

Unheard Wishes: A Tale of Desires

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Fck_You_Web_NovelLv4Fck_You_Web_Novel

I don't know what to say but the interactions are so.....bland? forced? flat? and his inner monologues...if you can make the sentence without any innner monologues then do that.......example. "(calm down, calm down) blah blah..." to "adam took a deep breath to calm himself and his raging bo..."

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LAWLv10LAW

I thought i was hallucinating while reading it

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LuminousValentineLv11LuminousValentine

Imagine Makima being your ideal girlfriend

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Rock_DrakeLv4Rock_Drake

Alright guys, 800PS is very possible. Lets do this

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David_DrakeLv4David_Drake

Our poor MC is being groomed. And if all else fails, Makima will go full leech mode on him. Refusing to let him go

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Emperador_004Lv3Emperador_004

Cambia la personalidad del mc

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white_spaghettiLv4white_spaghetti

Thanks for the chapter

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ZERO_00000Lv4ZERO_00000

Thanks for the chapter

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jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

More chapter

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All_For_One43Lv4All_For_One43

gracias por el capítulo

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RogueCrescentLv14RogueCrescent

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