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Comments of chapter undefined of Strongest Warlock - Wizard World Irregular

Harsh_Raj_Singh_2745
Harsh_Raj_Singh_2745Lv14Harsh_Raj_Singh_2745

Evaluation and critique time- The general pacing, direction and new lore is great. The build up for future arcs is fantastic(coming of age, Chloe's plan, battle with fomorians etc.). Epic new power ups. Great world building.

APARIMIT_SHUKLA
APARIMIT_SHUKLALv1APARIMIT_SHUKLA

The world building is much better And I agree with your decision of not adding any power scales to this novel Because tbh , this novel really doesn't need it I have read the story completely it never felt off regarding power scales Doing a good job man with this one

Elyon:1. Wizard world doesn't have power scaling. Personally, it is not needed in this story, and is one of its strongest selling points. It's a pure fantasy story without any health bars, and leveling indicators. Do you see any power scaling in Harry Potter, and Lord of the Rings? That's the concept I am going for in this novel. Just like in the real world, you won't know how the person next to you is unless the two of you slapped each other's butt. 2. About the Academy, there's no need to always make a scene about Ethan learning things in the classroom because in stories, there are things that doesn't need to be written in text to be understood. It's like when you go to school. no one asks you what you learn in school because they understand that you go to school to study. There's no need to write the characters in the classroom every five chapters to make people understand that they are in a school. Even if its not written in paper or text, they are there to study, and learn things in school. I've gone to school for years, and believe me when I say that whatever I learned on it, I already forgot all about it by now. So, to cut the long explanation short, they go to school to study. Although its not written, classes are ongoing. Just like why Authors don't always need to write chapters about the MC breathing, peeing, and pooping. Its already understood that they do that, so no need to explain further.
Lawlzie
LawlzieLv15Lawlzie

Seff W

Spencer_Elizondo
Spencer_ElizondoLv15Spencer_Elizondo

I’m surprised no one realized that the biggest revelation in this chapter is that professor Rinehart is a descendant of Eques one of the founders of the academy

ZenithFlow
ZenithFlowLv14ZenithFlow

Cant lie you outdid yourself these last few chapters 👏🏿👏🏿

Karolak
KarolakLv13Karolak

As always you have created another masterpice of a story.

Troxking
TroxkingLv15Troxking

Thanks for the chapters!

EnragedKing
EnragedKingLv15EnragedKing

Thank you for the chapters

Forlorn_Soldier
Forlorn_SoldierLv15Forlorn_Soldier

TFTC! Life has been tumultuous as of late, so I appreciate all the extra efforts! The storm was a nice touch, and I look forward to seeing what will happen as a result of this latest escapade.

Forlorn_Soldier
Forlorn_SoldierLv15Forlorn_Soldier

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule