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Seriously man Lyall doesn't deserve to be in the harem when only one place is left , and she is constantly assaulting him when Ethan doesn't have any interest in her which is annoying The reverse situation of this wouldn't have been taken lightly by many
The world building is much better And I agree with your decision of not adding any power scales to this novel Because tbh , this novel really doesn't need it I have read the story completely it never felt off regarding power scales Doing a good job man with this one