Comments of chapter undefined of OLD-WORLD EXTRA

Fight was good but perhaps next time you could cover in a sentence or two the environment, positioning of covers before the action starts. Something of the like of. MC enters said building there are guards at the main entrence left and right of them is this and that. And besides the MC is this which he thinks he can use as cover. So from his point of view how he moves around from cover to cover, from room to room with a brief description of what he sees.