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Comments of chapter undefined of OLD-WORLD EXTRA

Talid_Ni_Seh
Talid_Ni_SehLv3Talid_Ni_Seh

Lol bye so Mc is someone puppets from the start ?

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laylag145
laylag145Lv15laylag145

It’s good to set goals for the mc early on, but I feel like the reasons he came to his decisions were kind of arbitrary. Not that “just wanting to” is a bad reason, but I can’t tell if the mc really “just wants to” or if his memories from the novel are influencing his decisons. Or if some other outside influence is messing with his emotions. Since I can’t tell which it is, I’m not sure how invested I should be in his goals.

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JesReadin
JesReadinLv15JesReadin

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

DisappointingMyBoy
DisappointingMyBoyLv1DisappointingMyBoy

Presumptuous, aren't we ??

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Ygreat
YgreatLv13Ygreat

will there be tragedy? like the MC family all died?? sorry I didn't read your novel before, so I don't know how the story goes, can you spoiler? :)))

Daoist338060
Daoist338060Lv13Daoist338060

It was too much, just stating them as a passing thought would have been much better than all this embellishment.

DaoistUvclvV
DaoistUvclvVLv2DaoistUvclvV

Dropping this novel here , not like the novel is bad . But becoz as i said before i just want to fuel my own fantasy. This however is a great story with no stupid bs like faceslapping and harem (which is exactly what i am looking for.)