GoldenStache
It’s good to set goals for the mc early on, but I feel like the reasons he came to his decisions were kind of arbitrary. Not that “just wanting to” is a bad reason, but I can’t tell if the mc really “just wants to” or if his memories from the novel are influencing his decisons. Or if some other outside influence is messing with his emotions. Since I can’t tell which it is, I’m not sure how invested I should be in his goals.