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Comments of chapter undefined of Becoming Immortal Through Getting Married

Daoistvp0XuJ
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i like this story author

Daoistvp0XuJ
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please continue doing this story

Blue_Sky_123
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kjxudvc
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❤❤

FreddyDeathBear
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the only plot hole I've noticed so far is that they somehow know he got married... even though he didn't tell anyone, and there wasn't any sort of celebration... "oh well they might've discovered it when passing by the town they were at, or maybe have people spying on him." first option is unlikely as it was pretty much destroyed within an hour after they left, and the second one makes even less sense... who are they going to have under their control that can spy on a random alchemist if they're all low level cultivators. a human? well they would rather die than anger a cultivator they're unfamiliar with, so that's not plausible. even if it was a cultivator would notice something if they were being followed for that long. once again, nothing against it, I'm just really trying to figure it out. 😂😅🤔

Zuzu15
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Thank you for the chapter 🙂

Andri_Prayoga
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👍