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World creator system

Just_for_fun1997

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Beastmode97
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You could also do an atreides and harkonnens

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Jonsnowing
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Sounds good

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Gargamel72
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Interesting

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Warhammer100k
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Kickedelm0
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And it will always be the same Mamnom will get eaten at the end when he was close to his goal

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Jaomixman
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Sounds great)

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Febfew
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I like this story, but over time everything became too easy, all the complexity of the canon was removed. The feeling is that the MC is playing chess alone. I'm not against him being overpowering, but not having anything worthy is frustrating. The text being an eternal narration with repetition of some paragraphs is also annoying... I'm frustrated because this story could be MUCH more...

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xinchago
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more

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FrostFries
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nice idea looking forward for tommorow

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