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Comments of chapter undefined of Infinite Rebirth System

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Kont_Archimedes
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I have a feeling that Chen Feng will be the cause of Xiao Ye's death 😄

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Kont_Archimedes
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My personal opinion is that both have their good sides. Here at least Mc has a firm and decisive attitude. He has emotions (a little psycho). That's good for me. But on the other hand there is not enough depth in the characters. Supporting characters etc. You have to try not to make them one-dimensional. Especially as the realms rise in power scale. And yes the first chs could polish - character interactions). Plus I don't have a problem with it but you can definitely be criticized for creating such a psycho Mc in 10 chs and completely killing his character development.

Hidden_Moon:Hey! Thank you for reading my new novel. I want to know what are your thoughts? Is it better than the previous one? I know that the first chapter of this novel was really bad, but overall, is this novel better than the previous?

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ReverseHit
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Are still goin to update the other book