Bronz_Deck
Another exaggerated thing about this fanfic is why would any Satan move to eliminate him is ridiculous he is less than an insignificant insect that can be killed by any of the people on sona or rias' team and let's not even talk about them even if they can delete him of effortless existence, he's so insignificant that it's unreasonable and not fictional to think that a Satan would go out of his way to pay attention to him actually shows this MC's lack of intelligence or he's overly arrogant thinking the world revolves around him let him be less than a cockroach to anyone in the DXD universe.
I am curious to know why you chose the cursed energy magic system for this fic.. In the shows its seems pretty restrictive, with each character having one niche technique and a domain expansion that they excel with.. Will the Game System allow him to learn other kinds of magic systems after mastery of the CE one? Story seems interesting so far, eager to read the next chapter!!