Comments of chapter undefined of Voodoo and Hoodoo: HP. [Dropped for now]

something new, I would like him to be chaotic-neutral, to learn dark and demonic magic, something new in harry potter fanfic, that he go to another school instead of going to Hogward and meet harry potter only in the goblet of fire tournament and that he was a little insane.

"To me, that would make the plot quite boring to follow, causing me to stop reading. I would prefer a middle-ground character, and for the 'bad' part, I would take inspiration from Dr. Facilier."

As one of you said that I should send Damian to another school of magic, there's some problems. For one is that of most schools isn't known in the Harry potter universe, giving me problems in writing them.

try to imagine major events you want the mc to go through and make a timeline and storyboard, this should help you keep track of your ideas and speed up writing..

I would like mc to be chaotic neutral. I think the mc should dive into the darker side of magic. And become a dark lord to some. Like when something big happens, they call him, even if they don't agree with him.

"As long as it is well placed in the story, I have no problem. What would bother me would be if you included too many surreal scenes in the story."